I don’t really know what that pole was there for in the first place o.O I thought he did that to give him air for some strange robot reasons–like maybe he wanted him to die a slow…slow death of thirst.
ah, well, if that didn’t read well that’s my fault. i meant for him to being attempting to undo the cement with a pole, but of course that would be futile. and then he inadvertently gave him air. well, some things are not going to read as well.
haha, yeah, robot jerk.and i’m glad it read for most people. action like that, with lots of cuts to this or that, they’re tricky to plan out. ya just never know how people might read it.
I feel like Virgil’s gonna be halfway to the city and just think “shit, I forgot the money”
haha, i think he has a little bit more focus than that.
haha that’s awesome! love this so far
thanks! always glad to hear from a new reader!
I don’t really know what that pole was there for in the first place o.O I thought he did that to give him air for some strange robot reasons–like maybe he wanted him to die a slow…slow death of thirst.
ah, well, if that didn’t read well that’s my fault. i meant for him to being attempting to undo the cement with a pole, but of course that would be futile. and then he inadvertently gave him air. well, some things are not going to read as well.
Know that, on my end, I understood the whole sequence perfectly well.
And man! Even for a literally heartless automaton, Virgil’s cold!
haha, yeah, robot jerk.and i’m glad it read for most people. action like that, with lots of cuts to this or that, they’re tricky to plan out. ya just never know how people might read it.
Ah! So that’s how he kept from suffocating. That *is* funny.
Bucket head did him a solid……………..
haha, I didn’t think of it like that, but I suppose if walking was important to you….