I’m having a spot of trouble telling what exactly happens in panel 4. From the preceding panels and the ones that follow, I’m guessing she does something that makes Alice collapse/fall from mucking with the metal bits? I’m guessing that bit of gray is her hand squeezing them, but what’s the large black shape?
that’s her back. i guess that could have been clearer. all you need to know, is she squeezed her guts, and she doubled over in pain. that, and i’ll work on making the panels clearer in the future. haha
Hey, if I was able to tell from the other panels what was going on, it’s all good! Shows the narrative flow is spot on!
thanks! sometimes it’s a tricky thing to sell the flow of action. always a learning experience.
Just getting a serious vibe she the one running Angel’s gang – possibly for a while now.
ahh. i understand. well, stay tuned. you might be onto something. maybe not that, but maybe?
I’m having a spot of trouble telling what exactly happens in panel 4. From the preceding panels and the ones that follow, I’m guessing she does something that makes Alice collapse/fall from mucking with the metal bits? I’m guessing that bit of gray is her hand squeezing them, but what’s the large black shape?
that’s her back. i guess that could have been clearer. all you need to know, is she squeezed her guts, and she doubled over in pain. that, and i’ll work on making the panels clearer in the future. haha
I feel in a sense we’ve actually met Angel now…
how do you mean?